Wednesday, November 30, 2016

Imaginative Story Info

Imaginative Story Instructions

You must:
·         Abide by the following due dates:
o   First Draft shared with correct title: Thursday, Dec. 1, BOC
o   Plot Chart: Thursday, Dec. 1, BOC
o   Revised Draft: Friday, Dec. 2, EOC
o   Final Draft with Process Packet: Wednesday, Dec. 7, BOC (see rubric)


You will:
  • Write an imaginative story (fiction) and take it through the entire writing process (drafting, revising, editing, publishing)
  • Write a 2-paged, double-spaced, 12-point font, typed story (longer stories might be accepted with a conference)
  • Publish your final draft in one of the following formats:  short story, short film with script, choose your own adventure book, first chapter or 2 of a novel, children’s book (paper or digital), narrative poem, narrative song, faux letters/journal/diary, play (in script format), or graphica
  • Use at least one purposeful instance of dialogue
  • Revise your story to add in vivid active verbs and decrease the number of boring be verbs.
  • When appropriate to your story, break in to appropriate paragraphs/sections
  • When appropriate to your format, break this story into pages/segments/frames
  • When appropriate to your format, create visuals/pictures
  • Do your first draft and revision in your Google Docs
  • Follow conventions for the title of your text.  Remember, we do not underline, italicize, bold or do really anything different with the title when it is ON the original text most of the time.

You may:
  • Work on drafts in class when you have finished your daily work, at home, or in the library before or after school
  • Present this story to your class (during extra time during final review/exams)
  • Conference with your teacher or with peers who are not busy with another project
  • Transform your story into another genre after the first revision
  • Have a “guest illustrator” IF they are properly credited
  • Use a really fantastic poetic/literary device for extra credit.  Then, you must highlight and label it on your final draft.  THEN, you need to explain why you used it – in other words, what did it add to the story or character. 

You may not:

  • Use a previously published story for this assignment
  • Copy work from another student or from the internet
  • Ask for a pass to the library during Activity to use the computers for this project
Imaginative Story Rubric

           


VERY evident
MOSTLY evident
SOMEWHAT evident
NOT evident
Organization/Progression of Ideas (35 pts)




  • Well-developed protagonist with a conflict
10
7
5
0
  • Clear beginning/middle/end* (BME) with smooth transitions in time and story
15
12
9
0
  • Paragraphing or other format-appropriate divisions are thoughtful and follow conventions
10
7
5
0
Development of Ideas (30 pts)




  • Interesting Dialogue that develops character or plot in a meaningful way
10
7
5
0
  • Vivid Verbs
10
7
5
0
·         Reasonable resolution for the conflict*
10
7
5
0
Editing (20 pts)




  • Error free final draft (1 pt. each error)**
10


0
  • Follows the conventions of your selected format as we went over together in small groups, including the title
10
7
5
0





Attention to Directions (10 pts)




  • All parts of packet present, in order
·         Rubric with name, period and date
·         Final Copy
·         Editing Sheet
·         IF you have them, early paper drafts
·         Story Chart
10

(all present)
8

(1 item missing)
6

(2 items missing)
0

(3 or more items missing)
  • BONUS:  Well used literary device that is highlighted, labeled and explained in terms of your purpose in using it.
5


0
*Cliff hangers and early novel chapters must have pre-approval and a signature here.  ________
**First two typed pages (or the equivalent) will be graded for editing, the full story for content                                                       

Monday, November 14, 2016

Latin America Unit Test 11/16

Latin America Unit Test

  • You will be allowed to use your ISN.
  • It is a reflective essay about the BIG IDEAS we’ve studied in this unit.  You will use examples from the various readings and activities as EVIDENCE to support your THESIS.
  • The best way to review is to go back through the Latin America section of your ISN so the ideas and potential examples are fresh in your mind.

Tuesday, November 1, 2016

Secrets of the Andes Test

Part One:  Identifying (matching) Hero's Journey elements and Archetypes from Secrets of the Andes.  (Use pink sheet and review we will do Wednesday.)

Part Two: Story elements, literary devices, and characterization in multiple choice and short answer format.  (Take notes when we fill in the story arc and study the discussion questions.)

Part Three: Extensive paragraph about theme. (Prepare a theme statement and come up with examples to support it in your head before the test.)

Sample Theme Paragraph:

Topic Sentence with a clear statement of theme.
Example from book with explanation.
Example from book with explanation.    (2 or 3 good examples)
Example from book with explanation.
Concluding sentence/So what?


        In "The School Play", Gary Soto convey the idea we often worry about things that end up not being a big deal. For example, Robert spends a full day responding to every question and prompt with his line from the play rather than a reasonable response. Robert does this because he is worried that he will forget his line during the performance. During the play, he still flubs his line, but the play just goes on and there is no big embarrassment or problem. Similarly, Robert is concerned that Belinda will rub his face in the grass and/or kill him if he messes up in the play. Belinda’s constant threats of violence make him afraid.   And, while it seems reasonable to be fearful of Belinda, in the end, she just pinches his arm.  While this is inappropriate, a pinch is far less severe than Robert imagined and far more likely than for a student to actually violently attach another at school. Once again, Robert’s worry did nothing to improve his situation or prevent Belinda’s aggression towards him.  If Robert wasn’t worried about messing up and getting hurt, there would be no conflict in the story.  Ultimately, though, the author wants us to realize that degree of worry and stress is never going to improve the situation and could actually make the situation worse.



Link to a well done piece on theme.  We're just looking at the first 3 minutes together, but in case you'd like to see the rest! 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p4qME64SkxM

Wednesday, October 26, 2016

Grammar Workbook Work for Oct-Nov

REMEMBER: READ EVERYTHING; FOLLOW ALL DIRECTIONS.  Seriously, read the examples and directions carefully!

Station Work from the first week of October:

Page 157:  Exercise 1  - numbers 1-7
Page 159:   Exercise 1  - numbers 1-10; Exercise 2 – numbers 1-5
Page 163:  all of  Exercises 1 and 2 (For Exercise 2 you may abbreviate U or QM.)

Page 183:  (This is just a quick review. I would prefer that you underline three times to indicate what needs to be capitalized rather than circle.) Exercise 2 - 1-10

October 18 (I realize the sub gave you extra, but this is what I assigned and will look for when I grade):

Page 177: Exercise 1
Page 179: Exercise 1, numbers 1-6; Exercise 2, numbers-6
Page 181: Exercise 1

Homework for 10/25:

Page 1 - Everything
Page 3 - Exercise 1, numbers 1-7

Review for Word Crimes Quiz 11/17:

FOR EACH OF THESE PAGES READ THE RULES AND EXAMPLES!

Page 169: Exercise 1
Page 171: Exercise 1, numbers 1-6
Page 173: Exercise 1, Exercise 2



Thursday, October 20, 2016

Homework 10/20

Name___________________________________________

In the big blue Literature Textbook:  Read pages 642-643 carefully.

Read “Good Hotdogs” starting on 644. Then, re-read lines 1-6 answer this question:  Which words in those lines show that the speaker and her friend are eager to eat hot dogs together?

Answer:  Which words and descriptions in lines 19-23 might hint at a joyful attitude?


Find one literary device in this poem.  Copy it down.  Tell what it is.  Explain why you think the author used it?

Read “Ode to an Artichoke” starting on page 648.  Find three instances in the poem where the author has personified the artichoke.
1.

2.

3.

Re-read lines 27-50.  Which metaphors and similes in lines 27-50 compare the artichoke to a soldier going into battle?  How does the speaker feel about the “soldiers”?



Would you rather eat a hot dog or an artichoke?

Thursday, October 13, 2016

2nd Nine Weeks Big Dates

Thur., 10/20 - Latin America Countries and Capitals Quiz
Thur., Nov 3 - Secret of the Andes Test
Wed., Nov. 16 - Latin America Unit Test
Thur., Nov. 17 - Brazilian Rain-forest Conference
Mon., Nov. 21 - Word Crimes Quiz
Wed. - Fri., Nov. 23-25 - Thanksgiving Holiday
Tues. or Wed., Dec. 6 or 7 - Classical and Traditional Stories Quiz
Thur., Dec. 8 - Europe Map Quiz

Tue., Dec. 13 - 8th period exam - PM block will take the LA test
Wed., Dec. 14 - 1st period exam - AM block will take the LA test
Thu., Dec. 15 - 5th period exam - PM block will take the SS test
Fri., Dec. 16 - 3rd period exam - AM block will take the SS test


Dec. 20 - Jan. 3 - Winter Break


Membean Quiz dates (all Mondays): 10/17, 11/7, 11/28, 12/12  (Reminder: all vocabulary quiz grades are averaged together during the 9 week period and then recorded once in the grade book.)

Update: Membean Break December - feel free to keep practicing and learning.  We'll start back officially in January!

Wednesday, October 12, 2016

Story Elements Test!

I am bumping the test to FRIDAY (10/14).  I want to do a little more review with everyone.  The Classics Book Assignment is the PERFECT REVIEW for the test as you will be doing the same things - reading a story (short) and identifying and analyzing story elements.

If it's highlighted on the Literary Lexicon, its on the test!

Allusion
Imagery
Simile
Metaphor
Personificaiton
Hyperbole
Onomatopoieia
Alliteration
Repetition
Irony
Setting
Archetype
Theme
Point of View
Plot: Beginning Situation, Rising Action, Inciting Incident, Falling Action, Climax, Resolution
Conflict
Protagonist
Antagonist